I'm pretty happy with the language now; my "pretty much final" edits are in and live (soon).
The tempting link "Learn more >>" goes to a Wiki page. Do we want to make a new, static version of that page, at least for the F7 launch-frame? I think, yes.
I changed the "leading edge" stuff to read:
"The Fedora Project leads the advancement of free and open source software. When you use Fedora, this software is in your hands."
I also trimmed out a bunch of extraneous language, made passive to active voice changes, dropped distracting pronouns, and tried to reduce the hype-speech ("the most bestest ev4r!!!!1!!!").
== FC6 to F7 conversion ==
In addition to updating the images, the following needs to be updated:
* Direct links to FC6 Installation Guide need to point to F7 version * ???
Join and get fedora pages are missing encoding defs. Why there is H1 saying "Fedora 7 Now available" and the rest says FC6?
Adam Pribyl
On Thu, 24 May 2007, Karsten Wade wrote:
I'm pretty happy with the language now; my "pretty much final" edits are in and live (soon).
The tempting link "Learn more >>" goes to a Wiki page. Do we want to make a new, static version of that page, at least for the F7 launch-frame? I think, yes.
I changed the "leading edge" stuff to read:
"The Fedora Project leads the advancement of free and open source software. When you use Fedora, this software is in your hands."
I also trimmed out a bunch of extraneous language, made passive to active voice changes, dropped distracting pronouns, and tried to reduce the hype-speech ("the most bestest ev4r!!!!1!!!").
== FC6 to F7 conversion ==
In addition to updating the images, the following needs to be updated:
- Direct links to FC6 Installation Guide need to point to F7 version
- ???
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On Thu, 2007-05-24 at 12:32 +0200, Adam Pribyl wrote:
Join and get fedora pages are missing encoding defs.
I don't see what this is; did someone fix it? The files are nearly identical, as templates go.
Why there is H1 saying "Fedora 7 Now available" and the rest says FC6?
Some of the content is "test content".
Good point, though. Are we ready to make it all F7-ish? Any reason not to?
- Karsten
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