Hi Chris
I browsed the documentation link and drilled down a bit. I do have a few comments.
It seems to me that the documentation is written for a reader or user already familiar
with FedoraTerms such as dnf, and some others are mentioned, without being defined.
For example, I did not find a sentence that says "The dnf utility provided by Fedora
is multipurpose, and providesthe user with a software package maintenance and as a system
upgrade tool. dnf is included with current Fedora
distributions.
Regards
Leslie
Leslie Satenstein
Montréal Québec, Canada
On Sunday, June 20, 2021, 10:15:45 p.m. EDT, Chris Murphy
<lists(a)colorremedies.com> wrote:
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora/f34/
"Fedora rawhide User Documentation"
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Chris Murphy
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