Re: gut check - Fedora Multiboot Guide

[Leslie S Satenstein]

Good thorough job that Roger has done. He is to be congratulated.


May I make two (only two, he writes well) suggestions?


6. Multiboot on BIOS SystemsAlternative title  6 Multiboot on systems based on BIOS
startup code

7. Multiboot on UEFI Systems
Alternative title   7 Multiboot on systems based on UEFI startup code
 
Regards 

 Leslie

Mr. Leslie Satenstein
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>  From: Pete Travis <me(a)petetravis.com&gt;
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> Sent: Saturday, October 4, 2014 3:30 PM
> Subject: gut check - Fedora Multiboot Guide
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> Hey Adam,
>
> I've been working with Roger,  a new Fedora Docs contributor, on a
> Fedora Multiboot Guide[1]. 
>
> Although the work definitely needs to be structured, there is a solid
> draft now, and your expertise would really be appreciated.  Would you
> please skim it over for glaring misconceptions or omissions?
>
> [1] https://fedorapeople.org/groups/docs/multiboot-guide/
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