9:15 p.m.
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora/f34/
"Fedora rawhide User Documentation"
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Chris Murphy
6:42 a.m.
Chris
I like to make changes using libreoffice. That is not the way Fedora Docs is provided,
but I would use it to provide touchups or suggest corrections to text.
For example: Here is a slight cut and paste from the installation guide. I changed text
for temporal order reads better. I would use LibreOffice change management, one can see
the diffs. or Git repositories.
Of course, if I had access to the raw text, I would likely provide pull requests.
Downloading Fedora
Fedora Editions
Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site,
https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Cloud for scalable infrastructure, Fedora Server for
organizational infrastructure, and Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user.
For alternative desktop environments or media built for more niche purposes, check out
Fedora Spins.
Each of these "spin" downloads provides a different set of default
packages,After the initial installation you can add to your system to customize it for
your needs. The installation process is the same for all spins and Editions, so you can
use this guide for any choice you make. THE UNCHANGED TEXT
Downloading Fedora
Fedora Editions
Fedora provides three primary Editions tailored for some specific use cases.
https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Cloud for scalable infrastructure, Fedora Server for
organizational infrastructure, and Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user.
For alternative desktop environments or media built for more niche purposes, check out
Fedora Spins.
Each of these downloads provides a different set of default packages, but you can add to
your system after the initial installation to customize it for your needs. The
installation process is the same for all spins and Editions, so you can use this guide for
any choice you make.
Leslie
Leslie Satenstein
Montréal Québec, Canada
On Sunday, June 20, 2021, 10:15:45 p.m. EDT, Chris Murphy
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https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora/f34/
"Fedora rawhide User Documentation"
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7:07 a.m.
Hi Chris
I browsed the documentation link and drilled down a bit. I do have a few comments.
It seems to me that the documentation is written for a reader or user already familiar
with FedoraTerms such as dnf, and some others are mentioned, without being defined.
For example, I did not find a sentence that says "The dnf utility provided by Fedora
is multipurpose, and providesthe user with a software package maintenance and as a system
upgrade tool. dnf is included with current Fedora
distributions.
Regards
Leslie
Leslie Satenstein
Montréal Québec, Canada
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7:20 a.m.
Am 21.06.2021 um 13:42 schrieb Leslie S Satenstein
<lsatenstein(a)yahoo.com>:
Downloading Fedora
Fedora Editions
Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site,
https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Cloud for scalable infrastructure, Fedora Server for
organizational infrastructure, and Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user.
Just a remark. That section is wrong for several releases now. As a look at
https://getfedora.org confirms it should read:
Fedora Editions
Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site,
https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user, Fedora
Server for organizational infrastructure, and Fedora IoT as a strong foundation for the
IoT ecosystem.
Cloud is not offered on getfedora.
7:39 a.m.
Thank you Peter for the feedback.
There are many things that bother me.One, is not related to documentation
Fedora media writer should also include a Fedora ISO download function. With an enhanced
Fedora media writer, I would use it to click onto an ISO image to download, provide it
with the USB device or DVD, and let it do both download and write to USB. It should also
check the received iso for download errors.
Here are my grammar rules from my schooling.
write on xxx On should be replaced with about or onto as write about xxx or
write onto xxx
I write onto a paper. On can be used as He is on topic.
On vs onto, put the book onto the table. Where is the book? it is on the table.
Similar distinction between "in and into"
In many places the word see xxxxx should be refer to xxxxx
see implies immediate. refer to is an optional deferred action.
AmericanThere are five cars to choose from.International EnglishThere are five cars from
which to choose. or
You can choose from among five cars.
Action statements are better than passive.Download xyz followed by abc to create the
USB.
better thanThe USB can be created by downloading xyz followed by abc.
My sources.English writing class in public school. And also "IEEE engineering
writing and speech guides."
Just my thoughts.
Regards
Grandpa Leslie Leslie Satenstein
Montréal Québec, Canada
On Monday, June 21, 2021, 8:20:09 a.m. EDT, Peter Boy <pboy(a)uni-bremen.de>
wrote:
Am 21.06.2021 um 13:42 schrieb Leslie S Satenstein
<lsatenstein(a)yahoo.com>:
Downloading Fedora
Fedora Editions
Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site,
https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Cloud for scalable infrastructure, Fedora Server for
organizational infrastructure, and Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user.
Just a remark. That section is wrong for several releases now. As a look at
https://getfedora.org confirms it should read:
Fedora Editions
Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site,
https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user, Fedora
Server for organizational infrastructure, and Fedora IoT as a strong foundation for the
IoT ecosystem.
Cloud is not offered on getfedora.
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