Please suggest Improvements for this script (Mirror in a box.)

[susmit shannigrahi]

Hi,
I have been working a few days on this, though this was finished a few
days ago...
This is working nicely as far as I have tested, can you please suggest
some improvements?

The concept is also there.
Basically the concept is you can have a whole fedora repo at an external HDD.
You can just plug it into any machine of a LAN and run the script to
have a working repo online (inside the LAN).

So if you have a external drive (you will get the contents of the HDD
online), please test it out.
Just follow the instructions and after that open
http://localhost/fedora to have the repository.

The script is here
http://susmit.fedorapeople.org/mirror/mirror_in_a_box_dec_30.sh