5:28 p.m.
I try to improve my 3d image , next will try to create a volumetric
material of water
This is result :
http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/59
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7:04 p.m.
On Sat, Jul 2, 2011 at 8:28 AM, Catalin <catalinfest(a)gmail.com> wrote:
I try to improve my 3d image , next will try to create a volumetric
material of water
This is result :
http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/59
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Is this some sort of joke? That's terrible.
Regards
Chris Jones
7:12 p.m.
It is not a joke, it's just unfinished ...
It seems that you are an expert, you have something better?
Because water transparency material and beating sun room is so bad.
As I said, I hope to solve this problem with a volumetric material to
give a feeling of water density.
2011/7/2 Chris Jones <chrisjones(a)comcen.com.au>:
On Sat, Jul 2, 2011 at 8:28 AM, Catalin <catalinfest(a)gmail.com>
wrote:
> I try to improve my 3d image , next will try to create a volumetric
> material of water
> This is result :
> http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/59
>
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Is this some sort of joke? That's terrible.
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2:29 p.m.
On Sat, 2 Jul 2011 03:12:13 +0300
Catalin wrote:
It is not a joke, it's just unfinished ...
It seems that you are an expert, you have something better?
Because water transparency material and beating sun room is so bad.
As I said, I hope to solve this problem with a volumetric material to
give a feeling of water density.
Frankly said, I don't like it very much either, but I'm a slightly
different type of person -- I never really liked 3D designs on computer
sans those that look photo-realistic (or paint-like)...
But to try to be a little bit more constructive:
* the water surface ends abruptly while in reality it should go to
(something close to) infinity thus practically fading out with less
and less detail
* the water surface is too contrastive, I'd try something softer
* compared to the original hand-drawn sketches (which I really liked)
the nautilus is rather plain
* the water colour feels gloomy
But still, if I could have a say (sadly I not a good enough artist to
do something myself), I'd really like if the Verne wallpaper had more
historical feel, something artsy, perhaps a direct development of the
original sketches with a tiny little bit of steam-punk touch.
Cheers,
Martin
3:03 p.m.
On 07/02/2011 08:29 PM, Martin Sourada wrote:
Frankly said, I don't like it very much either, but I'm a
slightly
different type of person -- I never really liked 3D designs on computer
sans those that look photo-realistic (or paint-like)...
Not clear (*sans*). You mean *save* or *except*? otherwise it sounds
like you're anti-3D art (and I doubt that). And 3D art can be
eventually touched up to look historic on GIMP
3:23 p.m.
On Sat, 02 Jul 2011 21:03:56 +0100
Onyeibo Oku wrote:
On 07/02/2011 08:29 PM, Martin Sourada wrote:
> Frankly said, I don't like it very much either, but I'm a slightly
> different type of person -- I never really liked 3D designs on
> computer sans those that look photo-realistic (or paint-like)...
Not clear (*sans*). You mean *save* or *except*? otherwise it sounds
Either my or
your English has holes (but it's more likely my misuse of
sans, at least it looks like it after looking it up in dictionary :D) --
I meant 'save', 'except'. More clearly: I don't like 3D design
generally
(well, mostly 3D games, the rest often falls into the other category),
however there is one exception and that is when it isn't
distinguishable from drawn art or photo unless you're an expert.
Martin
7:15 a.m.
But still, if I could have a say (sadly I not a good enough artist
to
do something myself), I'd really like if the Verne wallpaper had more
historical feel, something artsy, perhaps a direct development of the
original sketches with a tiny little bit of steam-punk touch.
Yes , but not Captain Nemo :)) .
The "historical feel" will not see in those waters, because is far
enough from camera.
12:03 a.m.
It was a difficult week for my laptop.
Another try with nautilus blender file ...
http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/76
2011/7/7 Catalin <catalinfest(a)gmail.com>:
> But still, if I could have a say (sadly I not a good enough
artist to
> do something myself), I'd really like if the Verne wallpaper had more
> historical feel, something artsy, perhaps a direct development of the
> original sketches with a tiny little bit of steam-punk touch.
>
Yes , but not Captain Nemo :)) .
The "historical feel" will not see in those waters, because is far
enough from camera.
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3:24 a.m.
On Fri, 8 Jul 2011 08:03:32 +0300
Catalin wrote:
It was a difficult week for my laptop.
Another try with nautilus blender file ...
http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/76
The water's much better now :-) The nautilus still looks like from an
early 3D game, but I guess you'll work on that next :-) Keep up the
good work!
Cheers
Martin
PS: Please don't top post, I almost missed your message as I couldn't
find it bellow the quoted part...
4:04 a.m.
Martin please see the reality:
This image is an old illustration of the Jules Verne's book ...
http://www.bookdrum.com/images/books/14697_s.jpg
And this is some : Disney , children and another stuff of Jules Verne
marketing :
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/36/NautilusByWikiFred.jpg
I am against these products not work with reality.
Jules Verne was also a realist. see this link :
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/From_the_Earth_to_the_Moon#Similarities_to_N...
If you want stream and pipes then read : "The Steam House" .
Also about my 3D image ... i can use a color ramp for each color .. to
change the colors of wallpaper .
Thank's for feedback.
2011/7/8 Martin Sourada <martin.sourada(a)gmail.com>:
On Fri, 8 Jul 2011 08:03:32 +0300
Catalin wrote:
> It was a difficult week for my laptop.
> Another try with nautilus blender file ...
> http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/76
The water's much better now :-) The nautilus still looks like from an
early 3D game, but I guess you'll work on that next :-) Keep up the
good work!
Cheers
Martin
PS: Please don't top post, I almost missed your message as I couldn't
find it bellow the quoted part...
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6:19 a.m.
On Fri, 8 Jul 2011 12:04:01 +0300
Catalin wrote:
Martin please see the reality:
This image is an old illustration of the Jules Verne's book ...
http://www.bookdrum.com/images/books/14697_s.jpg
Sadly, this image is not very detailed so there's not much to
see :( But from what can be seen, it looks similar to some real
post-WW2 submarines.
And this is some : Disney , children and another stuff of Jules
Verne
marketing :
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/36/NautilusByWikiFred.jpg
I am against these products not work with reality.
Hah, this is nice but too childish, I'd like to see some middle-ground.
Maybe something like this?
http://neoshinka.files.wordpress.com/2008/11/soukai_no_oujotachi_02_400.j...
Something like this would IMHO also work
http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/13
Cheers,
Martin
8:48 a.m.
However if I put pipes, will not to see.
The camera is on and water turbulence will blur everything.
Will remain a silhouette ..
2011/7/8 Martin Sourada <martin.sourada(a)gmail.com>:
On Fri, 8 Jul 2011 12:04:01 +0300
Catalin wrote:
> Martin please see the reality:
>
> This image is an old illustration of the Jules Verne's book ...
> http://www.bookdrum.com/images/books/14697_s.jpg
>
Sadly, this image is not very detailed so there's not much to
see :( But from what can be seen, it looks similar to some real
post-WW2 submarines.
> And this is some : Disney , children and another stuff of Jules Verne
> marketing :
> http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/36/NautilusByWikiFred.jpg
> I am against these products not work with reality.
>
Hah, this is nice but too childish, I'd like to see some middle-ground.
Maybe something like this?
http://neoshinka.files.wordpress.com/2008/11/soukai_no_oujotachi_02_400.j...
Something like this would IMHO also work
http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/13
Cheers,
Martin
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10:25 p.m.
On Sat, 2011-07-02 at 00:04 +0000, Chris Jones wrote:
On Sat, Jul 2, 2011 at 8:28 AM, Catalin <catalinfest(a)gmail.com>
wrote:
> I try to improve my 3d image , next will try to create a volumetric
> material of water
> This is result :
> http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/59
Is this some sort of joke? That's terrible.
Are there any specific points for improvement about the image you're
seeing that you could verbalize to help Catalin? E.g., is the texture
too high-contrast? Is the color palette too pale or too monochromatic?
Is there an issue with the composition? These kind of critiques can help
Catalin make what he's working on better and he can tell us more about
his plans for future iterations.
Is there anything in particular you would suggest to improve the image?
Let's try to provide each other specific points for critique or at least
some suggestions for improvement when providing feedback about each
other's work!
¬m
1:24 a.m.
2011/7/2 Máirín Duffy <duffy(a)fedoraproject.org>:
On Sat, 2011-07-02 at 00:04 +0000, Chris Jones wrote:
> On Sat, Jul 2, 2011 at 8:28 AM, Catalin <catalinfest(a)gmail.com> wrote:
> > I try to improve my 3d image , next will try to create a volumetric
> > material of water
> > This is result :
> > http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/59
>
> Is this some sort of joke? That's terrible.
Are there any specific points for improvement about the image you're
seeing that you could verbalize to help Catalin? E.g., is the texture
too high-contrast? Is the color palette too pale or too monochromatic?
Is there an issue with the composition? These kind of critiques can help
Catalin make what he's working on better and he can tell us more about
his plans for future iterations.
Is there anything in particular you would suggest to improve the image?
Let's try to provide each other specific points for critique or at least
some suggestions for improvement when providing feedback about each
other's work!
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I don't think this would be a good wallpaper, it's not abstract enough
in my opinion.
Great 3D though.
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2:35 a.m.
Maybe we get something better using gimp or mypaint with a basic image in 3D.
PS :mypaint is on http://mypaint.intilinux.com/ and is very good with
a graphics tablet
2011/7/2 Elad <el.il(a)doom.co.il>:
2011/7/2 Máirín Duffy <duffy(a)fedoraproject.org>:
> On Sat, 2011-07-02 at 00:04 +0000, Chris Jones wrote:
>> On Sat, Jul 2, 2011 at 8:28 AM, Catalin <catalinfest(a)gmail.com> wrote:
>> > I try to improve my 3d image , next will try to create a volumetric
>> > material of water
>> > This is result :
>> > http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/59
>>
>> Is this some sort of joke? That's terrible.
>
> Are there any specific points for improvement about the image you're
> seeing that you could verbalize to help Catalin? E.g., is the texture
> too high-contrast? Is the color palette too pale or too monochromatic?
> Is there an issue with the composition? These kind of critiques can help
> Catalin make what he's working on better and he can tell us more about
> his plans for future iterations.
>
> Is there anything in particular you would suggest to improve the image?
>
> Let's try to provide each other specific points for critique or at least
> some suggestions for improvement when providing feedback about each
> other's work!
>
> ¬m
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I don't think this would be a good wallpaper, it's not abstract enough
in my opinion.
Great 3D though.
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2:51 a.m.
Well, the three aren't that abstract either (except elements on the elephant sample
& floating castle). It all depends on the amount of steampunk-ness involved.
I think the problem with this image is not the concept but the finishing. Water and the
associated caustics is something that takes dedication and time to master. This is a huge
undertaking that demands
encouragement on the part of the critics.
I believe in this art. Keep it going.
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2011/7/2 Máirín Duffy <duffy(a)fedoraproject.org>:
On Sat, 2011-07-02 at 00:04 +0000, Chris Jones wrote:
> On Sat, Jul 2, 2011 at 8:28 AM, Catalin <catalinfest(a)gmail.com> wrote:
> > I try to improve my 3d image , next will try to create a volumetric
> > material of water
> > This is result :
> > http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/59
>
> Is this some sort of joke? That's terrible.
Are there any specific points for improvement about the image you're
seeing that you could verbalize to help Catalin? E.g., is the texture
too high-contrast? Is the color palette too pale or too monochromatic?
Is there an issue with the composition? These kind of critiques can help
Catalin make what he's working on better and he can tell us more about
his plans for future iterations.
Is there anything in particular you would suggest to improve the image?
Let's try to provide each other specific points for critique or at least
some suggestions for improvement when providing feedback about each
other's work!
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I don't think this would be a good wallpaper, it's not abstract enough
in my opinion.
Great 3D though.
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3:08 a.m.
My biggest problem with this as Is 3D hardware.
I tried rendering on the Internet with the proposed solution, but none
of them accept and related files linked and append.
( see
http://wiki.blender.org/index.php/Doc:Manual/Data_System/Linked_Libraries...)
I'll try to use a single file without append or linked blend files ,
it will be very hard ... for my Eee PC 1000H.
Anyway , It is not only rendering, I tried to do a rendering like this image :
http://www.thomaskrijnen.com/BPY/hidden-line-render-2.jpg
But the script of thomas is not ready , because is just for one object
and i need to use a trick.
I hope will finish soon . :(
2011/7/2 Onyeibo Oku <twohotis(a)gmail.com>:
Well, the three aren't that abstract either (except elements on
the elephant sample & floating castle). It all depends on the amount of steampunk-ness
involved.
I think the problem with this image is not the concept but the finishing. Water and the
associated caustics is something that takes dedication and time to master. This is a huge
undertaking that demands
encouragement on the part of the critics.
I believe in this art. Keep it going.
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2011/7/2 Máirín Duffy <duffy(a)fedoraproject.org>:
> On Sat, 2011-07-02 at 00:04 +0000, Chris Jones wrote:
>> On Sat, Jul 2, 2011 at 8:28 AM, Catalin <catalinfest(a)gmail.com> wrote:
>> > I try to improve my 3d image , next will try to create a volumetric
>> > material of water
>> > This is result :
>> > http://publictest04.fedoraproject.org/artboard/post/view/59
>>
>> Is this some sort of joke? That's terrible.
>
> Are there any specific points for improvement about the image you're
> seeing that you could verbalize to help Catalin? E.g., is the texture
> too high-contrast? Is the color palette too pale or too monochromatic?
> Is there an issue with the composition? These kind of critiques can help
> Catalin make what he's working on better and he can tell us more about
> his plans for future iterations.
>
> Is there anything in particular you would suggest to improve the image?
>
> Let's try to provide each other specific points for critique or at least
> some suggestions for improvement when providing feedback about each
> other's work!
>
> ¬m
>
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I don't think this would be a good wallpaper, it's not abstract enough
in my opinion.
Great 3D though.
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