On Sat, May 30, 2009 at 09:22:39AM +1000, Murray McAllister wrote:
On Sat, May 30, 2009 at 3:13 AM, Eric Christensen
<eric(a)christensenplace.us> wrote:
> Thanks to Jack and Paul for stepping up and really getting the release
> announcement[1] built. We, at Docs, have reviewed the final draft and
> think we are in consensus that it is complete. Please look over it
> and see if anything jumps out at you. If not, this is what we'd like
> to go with.
>
> [1]
http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Release_Announcement_for_F11
First sentence spells today as "to-day", but maybe that is intended?
That's intended, in the spirit of usage in English over a century ago.
Also, there are spaces after "..." and the capital letter
following.
I removed the ellipses since they really didn't indicate anything in
particular. I suppose I could go read up and find out how they were
used idiomatically way back when, but it didn't seem vital.
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