Fedora Video

[nitesh narayan lal]

Hi all,
Few days back I had made a small video about Fedora Join.
You can get the video on https://vimeo.com/64942108 .
It will ask for password as its not public (Password:niteshfedorajoin)
Please feel free to share your views and suggestions about the same .
Regards
Nitesh Narayan Lal

[mario juliano grande balletta]

Thank you for video effort, it is helpful and has a useful theme, however,
the music left me with a confusing impression, as it did not exactly fit
the theme.

You might either record the sound bites and synchronize the animation, or
perhaps choose music that seems more relevant and not sad, emotional, or
melancholy, less dramatic for a technical/business theme.

Apologies for the criticism, only trying to be helpful and honest, please
do not be offended as I am not a multimedia expert and not a
designer/artist, only an observer.

Thanks again for the work and efforts!  Much appreciated!

On Thu, May 2, 2013 at 8:12 AM, nitesh narayan lal <
niteshnarayanlalleo(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:

>  Hi all,
>  Few days back I had made a small video about Fedora Join.
>  You can get the video on https://vimeo.com/64942108 .
>  It will ask for password as its not public (Password:niteshfedorajoin)
>  Please feel free to share your views and suggestions about the same .
>  Regards
>  Nitesh Narayan Lal
>  --
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>  marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
>  https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing

[nitesh narayan lal]

yeah very true indeed, actually that's a reason why I need some help
and its one of the reason why I shared it on the mailing list.
Still I will try to look something more meaningful, thanks a lot for
your comments .


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Regards
Nitesh Narayan Lal

[Roger Sinel]

I thought the music was fine. I think the first sentance should be "I want
to cont........." and not "I will contr....." it's confusing with
"I
will.....".
The bubble text is to small to read on a smart phone at normal 30-40cm
distance.
Apart from that it's great, useful and to the point. Good effort.

/Roger
On 2 May 2013 17:01, "mario juliano grande balletta" <
chanchito(a)fedoraproject.org&gt; wrote:

>  Thank you for video effort, it is helpful and has a useful theme,
> however,
>  the music left me with a confusing impression, as it did not exactly fit
>  the theme.
>
>  You might either record the sound bites and synchronize the animation, or
>  perhaps choose music that seems more relevant and not sad, emotional, or
>  melancholy, less dramatic for a technical/business theme.
>
>  Apologies for the criticism, only trying to be helpful and honest, please
>  do not be offended as I am not a multimedia expert and not a
>  designer/artist, only an observer.
>
>  Thanks again for the work and efforts!  Much appreciated!
>
>  On Thu, May 2, 2013 at 8:12 AM, nitesh narayan lal <
>  niteshnarayanlalleo(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:
>
> > Hi all,
> > Few days back I had made a small video about Fedora Join.
> > You can get the video on https://vimeo.com/64942108 .
> > It will ask for password as its not public (Password:niteshfedorajoin)
> > Please feel free to share your views and suggestions about the same .
> > Regards
> > Nitesh Narayan Lal
> > --
> > marketing mailing list
> > marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
> > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
>
>
>
>  --
>  marketing mailing list
>  marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
>  https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
>

[nitesh narayan lal]

Sure I will make that change . Thanks

On 5/2/13, Roger Sinel <roger.sinel(a)nordickiwi.com&gt; wrote:
>  I thought the music was fine. I think the first sentance should be
> "I want
>  to cont........." and not "I will contr....." it's confusing with
> "I
>  will.....".
>  The bubble text is to small to read on a smart phone at normal 30-40cm
>  distance.
>  Apart from that it's great, useful and to the point. Good effort.
>
>  /Roger
>  On 2 May 2013 17:01, "mario juliano grande balletta" <
>  chanchito(a)fedoraproject.org&gt; wrote:
>
> > Thank you for video effort, it is helpful and has a useful theme,
> > however,
> > the music left me with a confusing impression, as it did not exactly fit
> > the theme.
> >
> > You might either record the sound bites and synchronize the animation, or
> > perhaps choose music that seems more relevant and not sad, emotional, or
> > melancholy, less dramatic for a technical/business theme.
> >
> > Apologies for the criticism, only trying to be helpful and honest, please
> > do not be offended as I am not a multimedia expert and not a
> > designer/artist, only an observer.
> >
> > Thanks again for the work and efforts!  Much appreciated!
> >
> > On Thu, May 2, 2013 at 8:12 AM, nitesh narayan lal <
> > niteshnarayanlalleo(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote:
> >
> >> Hi all,
> >> Few days back I had made a small video about Fedora Join.
> >> You can get the video on https://vimeo.com/64942108 .
> >> It will ask for password as its not public (Password:niteshfedorajoin)
> >> Please feel free to share your views and suggestions about the same .
> >> Regards
> >> Nitesh Narayan Lal
> >> --
> >> marketing mailing list
> >> marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
> >> https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
> >
> >
> >
> > --
> > marketing mailing list
> > marketing(a)lists.fedoraproject.org
> > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
> >
>  

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Regards
Nitesh Narayan Lal

[nitesh narayan lal]

I got a lot of help from tatica in making this. Thanks tatica.



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Nitesh Narayan Lal